Gif Review: The Bone Season by Samantha Shannon.

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This is the first gif review on Creative Babblings and the whole process has been so exciting.

The front cover and pre-read:

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First Chapter: Very intriguing to see where this goes.

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The next two chapters: Okay…this has stepped up a notch.

It’s okay…for now:

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But then:

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And what follows:

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And then:

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We’re in…deep:

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But its okay, it’s day one:

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Night comes and the intrigue builds:

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But everything is fine, so clearly something bad is coming….

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And it does:

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My view of THE BONE SEASON by SAMANTHA SHANNON:

The Bone Season is a fast paced dystopian fantasy with secret organisations and even more secret governments. It’s a great read and kept me hooked all the way through. I’m starting THE MIME ORDER very soon and I am quite clearly hooked on the series. I can’t wait to see how the rest of the books play out.

 

New Feature: Gif Reviews

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A new feature on Creative Babblings will be the inclusion of book reviews. I’ll be doing them differently to the average review. Instead of lots of words the reviews will be explored through gifs.

This is likely an insane idea, but I wanted to do something fun while reading all the books on my TBR lists, which refuses to stop growing- I’ve placed myself on a book ban during March.

While reading a book, I will collect as many gifs as a I can that accurately portray my response of the journey, from front cover to last page.

The reviews are highly subjective, and they likely won’t help you make a decision on whether to read the book or not. But you’ll see my responses without any spoilers, or only a few. No major ones.

At the end, there’ll be a brief summary of my thoughts on the book. Then I’ll move on to the next book. Simple.

The first book I’m going to gif review is The Bone Season by Samantha Shannon, so keep a look out.

First Draft Hell

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Right now, I’m supposed to be writing the first draft of a novel. It’s the same story I’ve been playing with for three years now, but there comes a time when you realise something is not quite right. When that happened, I sat myself down and said, ‘Something needs to change.’

So I changed it.

I’ve spent last week writing an outline for this novel. I’ve took old scenes and mixed them up, enhanced a few character back grounds and asking myself should I really do this? Should I take something that’s half formed and scrap it, all to start again?

Part of me said no, what’s the point?

The point I realised is this: I won’t learn any other way.

Writing is a difficult craft. Making something work when writing is even harder, especially if your inner critic thinks it can strut around and call the shots, its sometimes impossible.

I’m just over 5000 words into this first draft, and you’d think I’d know the world by now. But the truth is I don’t, I know it as well as I created it. But even then, new things turn up all the time. That’s part of the process, there will always be new ideas that will surprise you.

Another thing, I’ve realised I detest first drafts. It’s supposed to be the fun part of writing (apparently), but if I could hide from them I would.

My first drafts are ugly, real monstrous pieces of work. There’s not much detail to go on in my first drafts, and to be quite honest, I prefer it that way. The reason for this is my inner critic. We all have one. There is no denying that. My inner critic likes to contemplate every word chosen and what that word could possibly imply to my readers. If that sounds familiar, listen up, your inner critic is slowly killing you and your creativity. There, I said it.

The problem with inner critics that are this harsh means you’re harsh on yourself. You’re surrounded by books that have spent years in the making, and then changed and rewritten and reworked and edited. But the truth is, our work is not going to be top notch, NOT YET.

I repeat, NOT YET.

And that’s because we’re too focussed on being as good as those books that are published, and one day we will be. But for now, put your inner critic in a box and lock it up. Sure, entertain them while you write and make little notes to yourself, so you know you’re going to come back and fix things. But, shut them up. Because the only thing that will suffer is you. The piece you’re writing won’t suffer, it doesn’t know how to live just yet, but you do and you will turn yourself inside out to reach this kind of perfect you have in your head.

I’m doing it right now, which is why I’m distracting myself with this blog post. When it comes to first draft hell, get the piece finished and remember, you’re coming back to it later. It’s not going to be stranded and left looking like a shrivelled up rose. Nope, we’re going to finish planting it and then we’re going to nurture it. That’s how we get to perfect.

So my fellow writers, write on.

You’ve Got That Idea, Now Where To Start?

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In the writing world, there is always this idea that you’re either a planner or a pantser. Sometimes, it is hard to distinguish whether you are one or the other.

You can be both. In fact, I’d advise you to be both.

When you have an idea, and I mean the early kernels of a story, it can be difficult to really grasp the full extent of an idea and the story it can become. If you don’t know whether your MC is going to survive, or if he/she gets their love interest, be the pantser you know you can be and see where the story goes.

We’ll call this Draft Zero.

In Draft Zero, anything can happen. Your only aim is to understand your story. Don’t worry about anything else. Just get the words out. And if the words aren’t coming? Free write, whether it’s related to the story or not, sometimes it’s good to get the creative mind working. And if that doesn’t work, go for a walk or read a book. We both know that TBR list isn’t getting any smaller, so you might as well make a dent in it. Then come back and try again.

Now let’s say you’ve finished Draft Zero, if you haven’t, don’t worry. You’re probably experiencing some mixed feelings about your writing. You’re excited that you finally finished the story.

*cheers and claps for you*

Well done! You have every right to feel this way. What you have done is something not everyone can do, and you did it. The other feeling you probably have is once you decided to read what your wrote.

“Did I really write that?”

“Oh, gosh that’s shocking.”

“It’s so ugly.”

Relax. It’s supposed to suck. It is Draft Zero after all.

You have a rough story, with all the hideous clichés and the poor grammar included. Don’t fret, because this is when you can become the planner.

Take what you’ve got and read it through, or go from memory if you that’s how you work. I find it difficult to read through long lengths of my writing, but sometimes you’ve got to eat that proverbial bullet and read what you wrote. Once you’ve done that, write it again.

In Draft Zero, you explored your characters and the world in a hideous fashion. You know them better now. Yes, your MC by this point is tired of having to relive the same traumatic inciting moment that is the beginning, but it makes them stronger characters, but most importantly, it makes you, the writer stronger.

People always say write, write, and write some more. It’s tiring, and trying to balance all these character feels…. ugh *yawn* It’s hard thing to do, and you shouldn’t feel discouraged by the hard work, because it is actually the fun part.

Draft Zero is now your very rough outline. You don’t have to follow it. I’ve wrote several drafts of the same novel, each one differing that little more. The important thing is to rewrite. See what else you’ve got inside you. Would your MC fair better in a fight if they’ve had any previous training to defend their self? Add that in. Does your love interest need to get hurt for the MC to care about them more? Add that in too.

And if you really hate what you wrote, turn to paper and jot things down, sometimes the mind can focus and see the bigger picture on paper rather than a screen.

I follow Susan Dennard’s lead with ‘Cookie-Scenes’. Reading her advice, helped me out a lot. So, go and check out her website and see what it can offer you.

I promise, even though writing is hard (really hard), it’s worth it when you finally get your story right, and it can be months or years before that happens. The most important thing to do is: Don’t Give Up!

 

NaNoWriMo – 6th November

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For normal people, today is day six of NaNoWriMo. For me, it’s day five.

I’m ahead, but I am also behind. I am ahead because I wrote a lot to begin with and I am behind because I haven’t wrote anything for the past two days. This means, my days have caught up to me and that today is going to be a race forward game to get this draft further.

Good luck NaNoWriMo’s! We can do this!

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Day 30 of 30 of Writing Challenge – Word: Door

Today’s word is: Door

It was forbidden for anyone to use the old oak door. The only person who used it was the Duke. For a couple of hours in the day he’d creep out from the room behind the door and then he’d stay a while. He’d carry out any Duke duties for the day; such as, signing parchment, entertaining visitors. All this was done, however, for several hours a day. He was out no longer than twelve hours. Sometimes, his presence was as long as an hour. 

One day, the Duke never revealed himself from behind the door. His servants and loyal attendants gathered outside the door, awaiting their master.

But, he never opened that door. He never stepped through it on that day. 

What his servants didn’t realise is that, the Duke had slowly been escaping the house. Escaping his prison guards. They didn’t know their Duke was under house arrest, nor did they know what he had done prior to his imprisonment. 

At the end of they day, no one will know what the Duke did. They will never find the Duke again. 

Day 29 of 30 of Writing Challenge – Word: Crush

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Today’s word is: Crush

Having a crush is like being crushed.

Crushed by these thousands of emotions all down to one person.

Crushed by these thoughts of that particular one.

You can never escape these feelings and thoughts.

They become a beautiful nightmare, one you experience in your waking life. 

Having a crush is like being crushed. 

Day 28 of 30 of Writing Challenge – Word: Window

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Today’s word is: Window

There is a window of opportunity for everyone in life.

That window is opened by mere actions. A simple two second thought can affect your choices, this choice then goes on to effect your day. Opportunity is created. 

In a scary way, opportunity is destiny. Would you have made the same choice if you was faced with the same decision, perhaps that is deja vu. Perhaps we don’t have a choice. 

That is up to you to decide.

NaNoWriMo

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I used to be apart of NaNoWriMo. I never truly understood what it was all about, plus my technology skills at the time were somewhat lacking.

However, I’ve decided to start again. Starting anew, I have signed up to NaNoWriMo (Yes, I’m a day late).

I thought it would give me the motivation to actually push my work forward and practice writing novels, and also helping me to finish a sequel I am working on.

So from today, I shall keep you up to date with how my own NaNoWriMo is getting on, and I’d love to hear how your own NaNoWriMo is coming along!

Can’t wait to hear from you all.

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